...may be better dealt with in person
I absolutely agree, there's nothing like a good positive "discussion" when there's discrepencies within a band, and it should be discussed when everyone's present, Larry you raised the issue of "stage volume", which no doubt would get the talking begin, Neil could then handle the chat and get opinions from all band members (including your good self) to resolve this "problem" in the most satisfying manner for everyone, I'm sure everyone in your band want to sound good and well balanced within the band, if not it's only an egocentric trip.
Your initial e-mail was fine but somehow very direct, and yes, we can see that you were upset at the time of writting it, it has been somewhat misinterpreted by you band leader, his answer proves that point very clearly (gosh, he doesn't take his role lightly... do you have to clock in when you come to play??).
Your answer is much better, it has the aim of cooling down the situation and at the same time apologizing if anyone was unjustifyingly attacked, you only wanted to raise an important point which in your eyes is not very professional, and that point is still present ATM in your response.
I agree with Philippe, wait to meet Neil and the rest of the band... but I feel after the mail exchange that this situation has to be discussed.
After all he said: "
You make a few points that are worthy of discussion in terms of our volume. I wish you had stated them succinctly and objectively, and without editorial. ", which is good, at least it seems that he agree that this volume issue should be discussed and resolved... in a more gentle and friendly manner
It's always better to talk first... words can be forgotten, things in writting always remain in everyone's memory.
I genuinely hope that this "stage volume" issue will get resolved for you Larry, good luck and keep smiling
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