I could hear you fine, but I had to ride the volume because the drums were then REALLY loud. Maybe consider using two separate mice. That way you can duck them in post.
The notation at the bottom is a nice touch.
I would consider bringing your grace notes down on the flams. I agreed with the guy in the YouTube comments at first. It really looks like you're playing Swiss Army Triplets. After I watched it a second time I could see that you were technically playing Flam Accents, but your grace note was equally as high, if not higher than your primary note, so it's hard to tell. Also, the "embellishment" that you're speaking of could also simply be called flam drag.
If you're trying to get a bunch of followers and do a Mike Johnston kind of thing I would consider keeping it shorter. People lose interest in videos SO QUICKLY. Play it once, twice and most. Tell us what it is, slow it down and get out of there.
It's a great start though. Post some more. Nice tubs, by the way.
